The Path to Fate
A million thoughts you'll never mention ,
it all started with a good intention
Don't look back now you'll turn to stone ,
to earn your peace you'll walk alone
With each step the breeze a guide ,
conquer unknown fears you have inside
Along the way we all will fall ,
it takes more time but you can crawl
If you still feel weak stop and rest ,
no need to panic , it's just a test
Escape your mind we all pretend ,
no need to rush , there is no end
It's not to soon , you're never late ,
always perfect timing to choose your fate
Such a beautiful words, express your lovely soul.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards.
Thank you so much !!! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteI love the pacing and rhythm,
ReplyDeleteand everything rhymes, wonderful!
But not only is the poem technically good, what wonderful images, and what interesting emotions you conjure up! A really excellent poem!
Matt , thank you so much for the positive feedback !!! :)It seems because of technology unfortunately poetry is a dieing art but I've always loved to write. It's good to know some people still like to actually read something ;)
DeleteAnd as for the picture it was a bridge I saw while taking a walk in the woods , I was bored and editing it and bammmm ... The face popped out , lol , anyone have an idea what his name could be ?!?
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